National Quarantine
What would our past kings say?
If they saw us now, how we turned out.
Sacrifice is worthless now, we've all been betrayed.
Everyone, without a doubt.
They want us to keep living in fear.
Pumping uncertainties into our veins.
Unable to comprehend the truth here.
Helpless to use our brains.
Polluting our very future.
They get horny by imitating God.
Covering up, and killing our own kind, while keeping the same composure.
The new regime is just the start, no one finds this odd?
How many ounces of blood must they spill.
Countless souls have been condemned.
What are they trying to fulfill?
A painted portrait of lives abandoned.
Well maybe...certainly. We put to much trust in them.
Don't turn and run, stand your ground.
Their satisfaction will only condemn.
The pride we once had, can be found.
Bow down, we are the anti-resistance
Prepare to dig your own grave.
We are no longer slaves to your existence.
Never again will we be a slave.
Restless until the entire human race is beneath their heel.
My brothers we can survive.
They are only surveying us to close the deal.
I strive to exist, to stay alive.
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Hey everyone, m72mc asked me to post this here. I hope you all like it..it's probably my favorite poem to date..if anyone wants me to explain what I ment by some things, I will no problem.
That would make
good lyrics to a punk song. I felt it. I'd like to make a song about that in my band.
Actually
I sing all my poems while I type them...but it's to deathcore bands...if you wana make a song about that, go right ahead. I'd be honored! Just give me credit in some way. Glad you enjoyed it!
Awesome
If i ever use any of those lines in a song I will give credit to John Sirmons. Thanks man, keep writing.
Thanks dude..if you need
Thanks dude..if you need help writing it, you can email me..I'm sure we can come up /w something.
Great Poem
Who do I ask for permission to post this on my blog?
Thanks
L
Me
You can post it, just link me to it here please and give me credit some way..put written by "John Sirmons"
Thanks, and thanks for posting it. :)
thanks
I will do that!
Here is a video
that might inspire you.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SR2K8dbn65M
Prepare & Share the Message of Freedom through Positive-Peaceful-Activism.
Maybe this will inspire a poem
WHO Admits to Releasing Pandemic Virus into Population via 'Mock-Up' Vaccines
http://articles.mercola.com/sites/articles/archive/2009/09/0...
Wow
That's unbelieveable. VR!
quiltingsando, I liked that..deff makes me think.
Bump and welcome!
Good words. Thank you for sharing them.
Thank you Qwerk, I'm glad
Thank you Qwerk, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Jiminy, I agree..I hope other writers post something, I'd love to read it!
Sorry
I missed some of your comments.
Jiminy Cricket, Believe me, if things keep going the way they are..Obama will be the one to give them a kick in the ass and get them writing more.
and I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
Nystrom, thank you alot, I'm really glad you liked it. :)
Mike, I just wanted to thank you again for showing me this forum! Real nice community.
Liberty_ Belle, I emailed you my second favorite one..if you like it enough, I'll post it for everyone.
All of you here are great inspiration, really you're. Thank you all for the support.
Absolutely.
If these are the times that try mens' souls, then these are the times that should be moving the pens of poets and writers.
...and yes, Obama is certainly providing ample fuel.
There are quite a few gifted folks here. I hope they picked up on the big hint I was dropping. :)
I hope you write more
/Mike
Front Fell Off
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcU4t6zRAKg
/Mike
Front Fell Off
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcU4t6zRAKg
Ditto that.
Awesome poem, 7 Deadly Sins.
Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful
Thank you for sharing it with us here at the DP.
pls just say ok to my frind...lets talk
I think he has a lot to say.....
/Mike
Front Fell Off
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcU4t6zRAKg
/Mike
Front Fell Off
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcU4t6zRAKg
Good idea!
But won't happen.
Why?
Every week, day after day, all I see is negative, horrific events, never anything positive, and I really dont want to surround myself with that in a sense.
It would be fun for one week, but then it'd be the same thing week after week. How bad obama messes something up/something he wants to change, someone is killed over something silly. I'm sure you get the idea.
Honestly though, I might try it one week for you and see how I like it..now if I can only find a non basis new channel or paper.
Well, maybe
you could do some positive stuff,too. Like our patriots who are doing positive pro active things to get the message out. Kevin the cartoon man, and people who go to the meetings and ask tough questions and get goofy answers. How about those great candidates we have trying to make a difference, they are sooo awesome and brave. How about some of the organizations like Oath Keepers and Retake Congress or the Committees of Safety. Don't forget all those great Youtube videos they need a poem of their own. Maybe, you could find that LITTLE piece of HOPE we need to keep moving forward.
That would be so awesome to read on a Friday to keep us fired up and ready for our Mondays. Oh, I hope you do this, because you have a gift for words and your prospective of the new r3volution fought through the internet. Let the TRUTH rise up and do battle with the liars. Peace Patriot
Prepare & Share the Message of Freedom through Positive-Peaceful-Activism.
I'll try!
My style is kinda...weird..but I'll try it.
If you wana post some links to the youtube videos, or websites with more info I'll review it and see if I get inspired...that's kinda how it happens..I just let the events unfold in my life, and what ever comes to me is what I record..music is a great inspiration.
Thank you, I really try to word my work cleverly. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the words of encouragement!
Anyone can give me links to info quilt is referring to and I'll gladly review it.
Thanks Mike and everyone else!
Thanks alot Mike..the environment around here is great.
pseudonym, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Liberty_ Belle, thank you! Thanks alot for reading it and I'm glad you enjoyed it...I have some other work..but I dont feel it's appropriate to post it here..they're rather dark and not political at all..but I got one brewing in my head I will post soon, and I think everyone can apply it to their lives..I just need to let it keep building up until I spit it out.
legalizeliberty, thank you! I'll deff put some more of my work on here.
quiltingsando, thanks for the welcome, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I've said it before, the nicest thing someone can say about my work is they enjoyed reading it! Thanks everyone
7_ deadly! I want to read them
* I don't care if they are not political or if they are dark..( I will love it more if it is dark!!) so if you do not want to post them here ...then at least tell me where I can enjoy! ? I know the feeling of building something up before you can spit it out...I love to paint...but I do it for my own joy of self expression and I don't care for boundaries of percieved judgements! Never post/write something to be judged as good or not...post it because it is a means of self expression. From the heart ...from the soul ...put it out there!!!
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"I truly wish that real life would no longer surpass the worst excesses of my nightmarish imaginings... Arthur Silber **
"I think we are living in a world of lies: lies that don't even know they are lies, because they are the children and grandchildren of lies." ~ Chris Floyd
You can be
our own in house poet. Summarize the weeks news and put it to a poem and post it on Fridays. I would really like to read what you come up with. Friday night poetry at the Daily Paul, I can digg it. We have cartoons by Tuma, why not poetry by 7_Deadly_Sins.
Prepare & Share the Message of Freedom through Positive-Peaceful-Activism.
Oh, that was soooooooooo
well done. Thank you so much for sharing that with us. Hope to read more of your posts, welcome.
Prepare & Share the Message of Freedom through Positive-Peaceful-Activism.
wish to see more poetry on DP
Thank you for posting this.
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"Better to fight for something than live for nothing.”
-- George S. Patton
“Complacent ignorance is the most lethal sickness of the soul.”
-- Plato
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"How can we justify to the unemployed and underemployed in the United States the incredible cost of maintaining a global empire?" - Dr. Ron Paul
Agreed.
Any ideas on how to give our DailyPaul poets/writers a kick in the pants to get their fingers moving?
Thank you for this poem!
* You are very talented and I have no problem understanding the meaning!
Do you have more to share with us?
I welcome you and any friend of Liberty ...and especially any friend of m72mc!
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"I truly wish that real life would no longer surpass the worst excesses of my nightmarish imaginings... Arthur Silber **
"I think we are living in a world of lies: lies that don't even know they are lies, because they are the children and grandchildren of lies." ~ Chris Floyd
So true.
"Unable to comprehend the truth here." I am really totally sick of being lied to all the time. Glad others feel the same way, it's my only consolation.
Thanks for posting...
Come on people lets give this artist a warm welcome...pls
Going out a bit but I hope you all give my friend a warm welcome... thank you...
I asked him to post, cause I love his poem...
See ya laters...
/Mike
Front Fell Off
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcU4t6zRAKg
/Mike
Front Fell Off
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcU4t6zRAKg