R3VOLUTION Via Adam

Good video, but where you put in the pictures for emphasizing the points discussed, they flashed too quickly. Also I do like the part of Ron Paul at the end and think it fitting, because he after all is the one who really got the revolution going, but I would not have him repeating the phrase. Instead of the very end part, I would use something more compelling to invite others to join and do their part in the revolution.

I agree about the static. I was using headphones and it is not pleasant. I would get rid of the static sound, and replace the static images with some words quickly displayed. Simple, good liberty oriented catch phrases.

I also think the Ron Paul part at the end seemed out of place. And repeating it over and over negated the impact of the entire video.

I love Ron Paul, but the subdued tone of Ron Paul is not the way to end this after the fiery style of Adam Kokesh.

End the video on a high energy note. Just end it at the Revolution fist and let it stay on screen a few seconds.

The pissing on the White House lawn doesn't seem the right way to end this video.

Just my thoughts, take them or leave them.

Good video, gets right to the point. Well done.

except for a couple points...the static at 1:50 and again a few seconds..the heart is pumping, adrenaline is pumping, and the static makes for a lull........and the repetition of RP's Let it not be said that we did nothing. I'd rather hear him say it once and read a bold print of the text. The print would be embedded in the thought after watching the video in my opinion.
Overall a 9.0

to your future work.
2 small quibbles since you asked for critiques:
1. The energy of early Kokesh all the way through doesn't transition well, IMO, to the Paul cip and white house cartoon at the end.
2. Clarify who your target audience is. this vid. would appeal most to VERY angry revolutionaries; out of its original context it may not translate. No specifics for the anger are given here in the video.
3. Bonus point. In Adam's more recent appearances he seems more "statesmanly," less revolutionary. You may want to consider how he now wants to position himself to win hearts and minds and votes.

and right to the gates of hell, I would.

You asked for critique... I might fade out the Ron Paul repeat at the end. All in all, OUTSTANDING.

Adam all the way!

This is from the march on Washington right? His speaking got better later. He seems to shout a little harder than necessary in that speech. Just my two cents.