Trey Grayson vs Rand Paul Comparison Page.
Submitted by Skyorbit on Mon, 09/14/2009 - 21:08
http://www.treygraysonforsenate.com
Trey Grayson For US Senate 2010 in Kentucky. A Page to optimize the keywords Kentucky, Senate, and Trey Grayson for Senate so people will find out about Rand Paul.
More info here.
http://www.ronpaulforums.com/showthread.php?t=209747
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Awesome!
Very good idea, bate the hook, set it then bash'em in the head!!
"There are only two ways to conquer and enslave a nation. One is by sword, the other is by debt." - John Adams
Is this intentional?
"Paid for by a fiend of Trey Grayson." at the bottom of the page
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A Way for Trey Grayson searchers to find Rand Paul
http://www.treygraysonforsenate.com
Trey Grayson For US Senate 2010 in Kentucky. A Page to optimize the keywords
The beginning might attract
independents to Grayson. (I'm not sure how many independents vote in primaries in Ky., though).
Defend Liberty!
Cool
It reads objectively in the beginning then trails off into a hit piece. I like it anyway. I didn't realize what a preppy little rich boy Trey was. He is no match for the offspring of RP.
hm
Fortune Favors the Bold
interesting. maybe you should include a disclaimer explaining you're not associted with the rand paul campaign.
another thing
"While Harvard professors are famous for promoting socialism and liberalism, Trey Grayson swears left and right (mostly left) that he is not a socialist or a liberal.'
You should probably stick to more substantive stuff. Plus, oddly enough, when one uses liberal with "ism" attached, they're usually referring to the origional meaning of the term.
Fortune Favors the Bold
Don't take it personal, this is only my opinion
I like it and really not bad considering the domain was only purchased 2 days ago. ;-)
You should spend a little time and try to make it a little more professional.
* Get a different picture of Trey Grayson - There are better pictures
* Align your paragraphs and texts. Everything should fall in line evenly. -- Center the quote at the top. IMO, the quote doesn't look good being left of the rest of the text on the page. Maybe centered? (notice the difference with Rand's quote)
* I'm sure you could get some folks here or at RPF to help re-write some of your bullet points so they come off a little more professional -- 'shocking bipartisanship' , officially refuses, and 'While Trey Grayson worked at Keating, Tray Grayson was not involved in the Keating Five Scandal, in which firm founder Charles Keating donated money to five senators in return for the favor of calling off legal investigations.' could all be re-phrased.
* To come off more credible, ditch words such as 'left-wing' and 'power-trip'.
* At the very least, < blockquote > your 'Critical Issues' so they line up more evenly. Tables would be best, but use that tag if nothing else.
Rand's page looks a little better. Your text is better aligned, except the quote... why is 'enumerated' not positioned within the quote boxes? Notice how the T from 'the' and V from 'Vital' are aligned? The top should look like that.
I like your web page. I think you did well by snatching up the domain name. Let the facts speak for themselves. RP (Rand) would be a far better candidate and if you phrase things correctly, you won't have to use words that have negative connotations such as 'left-wing' and 'power-trip'.
Sounding credible and professional will actually be more beneficial at converting 'on the fence' voters than a web page that is obviously a smear. Use that domain name wisely and convert the people who aren't sure.
Good job though!
Well put
I agree adamc1. The site is fun, but a joke. It could be so much more! I'd love to spread it around but it's obviously biased and therefore ineffective for anyone besides the choir. The overall idea is great and could potentially be very powerful if cleaned up. Like you said, block some quotes, let the record speak for itself. Put the views side by side, let people see where they stand on the issues. Even Grayson supporters would find it difficult to continue support once they see the difference. Well at least until the $500 a plate dinner money runs out :)
The facts, liberty and the constitution are on our side. There's no need to resort to juvenile smear pages.
Come over to the Rand Paul
Come over to the Rand Paul forums and give your ideas about what the text and stuff should be there.
The owner reads this thread.
http://www.ronpaulforums.com/showthread.php?t=209747
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A Way for Trey Grayson searchers to find Rand Paul
http://www.treygraysonforsenate.com
Trey Grayson For US Senate 2010 in Kentucky.
Well, it's not my website.
Well, it's not my website. But I'll link Ron Paul forums to this thread.
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A Way for Trey Grayson searchers to find Rand Paul
http://www.treygraysonforsenate.com
Trey Grayson For US Senate 2010 in Kentucky. A Page to optimize the keywords
Someone really needs to go
Someone really needs to go over it and clean it up. There are many spelling and grammar errors.
Drain the swamp!
Constitution
may have to be put on a back burner for a while..... (Trey)
Rand Paul 2010
Brad
Excellent Website
This is an excellent website!!!
"Let it not be said that we did nothing."
Let it not be said that we did nothing.-Ron Paul
Stand up for what you believe in, even if you stand alone.-Sophia Magdalena Scholl
LOL!! Big bump...how
LOL!! Big bump...how creative....
uh.....
I think you mean RAND Paul.
Everyone makes mistakes..no biggie....we get ya.
Fixed it.
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A Way for Trey Grayson searchers to find Rand Paul
http://www.treygraysonforsenate.com
Trey Grayson For US Senate 2010 in Kentucky. A Page to optimize the keywords
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New Hampshire and Ecuador
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If this is the first time they are spreading it, I give them a B-, but A for effort
wish the site fixed it's language a little bit, killed the "probably this and probably that" also step away from the War issue, it is not helping us in Kentucky, probably makes us look like democrats. Just my opinion
I was going to delete my message since it's fixed now
but alas you responded and that prevents me from editing :-[ Oh well...
New Hampshire and Ecuador
oh well
it's there forever... cue the music
I didn't know RON Paul was
I didn't know RON Paul was running against Tray Greyson. go figure
Duke
Paul went to Duke for grad school didn't he?
That's no different.
Post this Everywhere. And
Post this Everywhere.
And when you link it, make sure you put Try Grson's name, or Kentucky Senate or something in the name of the link, to help Google Recognize it.
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