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New blovel about currency collapse in the USA

‘Indivisible’ is a blovel about total socio-economic collapse in the U.S. and the intersecting lives of a diplomat, a sheriff, a soldier and an unemployed father as they try to survive a modern U.S. civil war.

I hope you like it! All feedback (good and bad) is greatly appreciated as I am readying ‘Indivisible’ for agent submission.

(warning: language)

http://goldsteinrepublic.com/archives/654

Thank you Mike for letting me post this on DP!



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Ron Paul is a physician and

Ron Paul is a physician and twelve-term congressman from Texas, and his third presidential run.

Buchanan documents his

Buchanan documents his concern across a wide front. For example, the combination

Oh my goodness

This is an excellent read, but I just found it at 11:30 p.m.! If I go any further, I'll be up all night reading this! I need to go to bed... or not... maybe another chapter or two.. then bed...

Great Book

This really is a great read. I highly recommend as well.

Vanilla You added the phrase

Vanilla

You added the phrase "Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Property." in Chapter 15. Would that mean that happiness is replaced with a free market principle where people should be able to trade, gather and create goods without government hindrance? If so I think that is brilliant!

I think so

Yeah, that's from the interrogation scene in 'Goldstein'! I'd like to take credit for that but it's not mine.

I had a very good history teacher named Mr. Myers at Shaw Heights Jr. High and he said that "Life Liberty and the Pursuit of Property" was Jefferson's original language and that John Adam's (ever the proto-neocon) edited it into "Happiness" instead.

I am forever indebted to Mr. Myers. He is proof that you can be a 'statist' yet still be reasonable. He turned me on to Orwell, too (another statist progressive with much to teach us). I never felt indoctrinated in his classes and he encouraged debate.

He was a good man.

I am on chapter 9 now and am

I am on chapter 9 now and am loving it!

Chapters 11, 12, and 13 are up

FYI. Edits, comments, advice, critiques, praise are all welcome.

Chapter 11 Up

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Marzan' platoon encounters rioters in Chicago.

(Thanks everyone for the bumps!)

Great will read later

and bump now. Sheesh! I need to get some housework done and get off the computer. Dang, I am really addicted to this stuff.

"We can see with our eyes, hear with our ears and feel with our touch, but we understand with our hearts."

Chapter 10 Up

Excerpt:

"To make matters worse, the reeling banks had closed a half dozen times since that black Friday. The slightest rumor triggered panic redemptions and movement into commodities. This didn’t sit too well with the bankers so they leaned on The Gnome to lean on Congress to make these new ‘alternative currencies’ less attractive than their beleaguered dollar. ‘The Currency Stabilization Act’, drafted by the bankers themselves, rammed through by the Speaker between botox sessions, and hastily passed by the worms in Congress, slapped a 100% “windfall gains tax” on the sale of twenty five different commodities. This didn’t accomplish anything other than to drive the commodity markets out from the light of the exchanges and into the dark alleys but at least they were ‘doing something’."

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Chapter 9 up

"The professorial Fed Chairman his ever-whitening beard and ever-receding hairline making him look ever gnomish, loosened his tie and poured himself a drink at the 7:30 opening bell. Perhaps the ship would not sink, he hoped. The Fed was keystroking billions throughout the night and had managed to finally prop up the futures markets a little. Their thought was that the animal spirits could be calmed at the NYSE open. But the system began to teeter from the bell."

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I read it, you are so talented.

Thanks, for sharing this with us.

"We can see with our eyes, hear with our ears and feel with our touch, but we understand with our hearts."

bump

Thanks for posting.

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Chapter 8 Up

here's a snippet:

"...This carried over into the daytime as Vaughn found himself mesmerized by the radio and television reports of the recent radical fluctuations in the stock market. The five to seven percent daily moves were compelling fodder for his sleep-deprived mind. The markets would always start off downwards from the bell like a sinking millstone. The talking head media idiots would hysterically proclaim “Flash crash! Flash Crash! Here we go again! Someone has to do something about those program traders!” After dropping ten to fifteen percent it would magically reverse course, rocketing up from the depths like a scuba diver’s marker buoy spit out by some Great White that had just devoured him. Once fully rebounded, the talking-head media idiots would return to sanity as if nothing had happened."

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Thanks for checking it out! I live for your clicks.

A big bump for your

activism, keep up the great work!!!!

Those who expect to reap the blessings of freedom must. like men, undergo the fatigue of supporting it.-Thomas Paine

The R3volution requires action, not observation!!!!

Chapters 3,4,5 are up

In case anyone dares to take a look! lol.

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Chapters 6 and 7 are up

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Bookmarked and bumped

to read tomorrow, thanks.

"We can see with our eyes, hear with our ears and feel with our touch, but we understand with our hearts."

thank you

thanks for the bump

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weekend reading bump

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Maiden Lane

the treasury secretarys name is Maiden Lane. LOL!

and her children

are Maiden Lane II and Maiden Lane III

cee cee

bump

blovel

new word to me.

"I have sworn upon the altar of God, eternal hostility against every form of tyranny over the mind of man."
-- Thomas Jefferson

It's new

I just looked it up on the Internet jargon dictionary,not there.

If I disappear from a discussion please forgive me. My 24-7 business requires me to split mid-sentence to serve them. I am not ducking out, I will be back later to catch up.

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...really?

Thank you Jon

It appears my source was flawed,It just got booted.

If I disappear from a discussion please forgive me. My 24-7 business requires me to split mid-sentence to serve them. I am not ducking out, I will be back later to catch up.

I'll give it a look, thank

I'll give it a look, thank you.

10-15 million more voters need to believe in non-interventionism (liberty) at home and abroad to change America. Minds changed on Syria. Minds changing on privacy. "Printing money" is part of the dialogue. Win minds through focus, strategy.