non-Collective message to the Ron Paul campaign from the DailyPaul.com community.Submitted by muckraker on Sat, 10/29/2011 - 19:30
This thread is to serve as a central point where we can collectively compose a letter to the campaign pointing out areas in which we think Ron Paul can improve his appearance and message. I will leave it to another member to compose the actual letter, but I encourage all DailyPaul readers to post a suggestion/critique below that should be addressed. Some notable suggestions so far have been:
1. Address the "ummmms" and "ahhhs" between words, and develop a more consistent speaking rhythm.
2. Be mindful of fidgeting and awkward hand movements.
3. Better explain cause & effect of the issues. Voters not yet supporting Ron Paul don't understand the details as to why he is correct in his positions. Relate, in concrete details, how it effects them (as though his is educating them). Speak to the audience, not the commentators and interviewers.
Any other thoughts?