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"Crossed Another Line" (Original song by DP poster)

Put some finishing touches on this, plugged the DP at the end. (in the text)
Anybody feeling creative? I'd love to get a decent video together for it!
Thanks for listening :)

http://youtu.be/PPpF3g0Ck5I

CROSSED ANOTHER LINE By Billy Ryan (iamjohngalt2011)

It's never what it seems
It's only what your eyes concede
A shadow of what lies beneath

It's never what it seems
The truth in what your mind perceives
And all that it's designed to be

The sirens call you to wake
But closed eyes still sleep
Held hostage in this great design

The silence cannot negate
What those eyes reveal
A prophecy in it's place and time

They crossed another line
But never even crossed your mind
Been over it a thousand times

It's never what it seems
You suffocate inside a dream
Just call yourself awake to breathe

You crossed another line
But never even crossed my mind
Been over it a thousand times

They crossed another line
But never even crossed your mind
Been over it a thousand times



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LittleWing's picture

I like it!

Thanks for putting the lyrics on the video! ;) Great job on the lyrics, music and a compliment for your voice too! You should post it on these two threads also :

http://www.dailypaul.com/270001/time-for-my-nightly-jam-session

http://www.dailypaul.com/274087/nightly-jam-session-thread-i...

There are plenty of talented video creators on this site so maybe appeal for some help if you want to put some visuals on it. Good luck!

P.S. I love what you wrote below ..well said.

"Each word I write is a bullet in my gun fired through the heart of the enemy. I don't think there are many complex arguments in the battle we are fighting. It all seems pretty black and white to me. That is, freedom, or slavery. Jewish slavery, chinese slavery, martian slavery....I really don't give a damn. They are all the product of one failed political philosophy. The scam of a millenium. One group of people attempting to get another to submit to their demands, and claiming the moral high ground to do so."

If Wars Can Be Started by Lies, They Can Be Stopped By Truth.

Thank you very much!

Like the music, it is all from the heart :)

Yours in Liberty,
IamJohnGalt2011

I like it, too. If I may, I

I like it, too. If I may, I will make two suggestions which you may feel free to ignore.
I believe in the first lines you should change the word 'concede' to 'conceal'. If you don't like it that way, I would change it to 'can see' (but I like conceal better and do not think concede does the trick).
Also, I believe you should change the line after the dream suffocates you to "Your breath calls you to awake". This fits better with a previous line about the sirens.
That is my 2 cents.
I really liked it, wtg!

bigmikedude's picture

Nicely

put together dood.

Thank you!

I really appreciate it :)

Yours in Liberty,
IamJohnGalt2011

Didn't mean to do that

My computer was freezing while I was commenting and somehow posted my comment 3 times. Don't know how to remove the repeats. Sorry mods!

Yours in Liberty,
IamJohnGalt2011

Libertarian Nine Inch Nails Song

Well, I think it sounds like NIN....seeing them in October!!!

Yours in Liberty,
IamJohnGalt2011

It's great/put up the lyrics

Great tune.. timely lyrics.. I wish you much success!
THANK YOU FOR SHARING.. I enjoyed it, will be thinking about it..

GOOD SONG!

Thanks :)

Will do. Good idea.

Yours in Liberty,
IamJohnGalt2011

And...

I'm guessing the picture of the troll doll is because people are always accusing you of being a troll?

Yours in Liberty,
IamJohnGalt2011

Takes one to know one, eh?

I don't get called troll much anymore.

Excuse me?

I posed a lighthearted question to you. I've only bothered to read one of your posts, the one where you asked everyone to vote on whether or not you should "stay" here on the DP. The comments in that post created a picture of you, for me, that said perhaps you are not very well liked. Nonetheless, I don't jump to conclusions. I don't believe in Zionist conspiracies. Someone could call me a troll for that perhaps, but my "awakening" came from, and continues to come from, many "Jews" (ie Aaron Russo, Max Keiser, Peter Schiff, etc.) And also non-Jews. I have not waged war on any group of people, nor have I taken it upon myself to be the advocate of any group. I have chosen the name "John Galt" for a reason. I have waged a verbal war against those who threaten the ideals we represent, and essentially threaten me. My physical war has been that which I wage every day, through the conduct of my own person, living my life honorably and attempting to be that person I strive to be and who represents the ideals of the country I wish we lived in. It is also the music I create. And make no mistake....when I write a song, I am hoping that it has an impact, equal or greater than some mindless puppet firing rounds at a target he's been instructed to kill. Each word I write is a bullet in my gun fired through the heart of the enemy. I don't think there are many complex arguments in the battle we are fighting. It all seems pretty black and white to me. That is, freedom, or slavery. Jewish slavery, chinese slavery, martian slavery....I really don't give a damn. They are all the product of one failed political philosophy. The scam of a millenium. One group of people attempting to get another to submit to their demands, and claiming the moral high ground to do so. I don't care about you, your crusade for israel or any other group. I care that you represent the very basic concept which presumably brings us all to this site. Individual rights. The golden rule. "Freedom".
No, it doesn't take one to know one. Be as you are.
And thanks for listening :) Glad you liked the song!

Yours in Liberty,
IamJohnGalt2011

Yep I liked the song

I'm not waging a war, just telling it like I see it.

As for my popularity, It has it's ups and downs, and I found the troll funny for the present DP group of trolls. Israel is a new addition in my AWESOME life, having come to the conclusion that loving Palestine and hating Israel is not a solution for peace. So I have come to LOVE Both.

The thread about should I stay or go.. had to do with a friend who wished I would dump DP, and yet, they offered to renew my Pro statis for my birthday.. So I actually made the post for my friend, and why I didn't bother responded to any response, kind or not.

And yeah, it does take one to KNOW one, walking in a person's shoes gives one compassion, which gives us the ability to be kind, and realize why those who are not, only show their own lack.

Anyways.. hope you find some creative artist, happy to give you the further bumps.

Thanks for the bumps :)

If your taking the time to respond to me was an act of charity, somehow pushing me into relevance, then thank you very much :) You did not owe me that gracious gesture.
For the record, I agree with much of what you say regarding getting involved politically, locally etc. Anyone who has dipped their toe into that pond, however, knows that it's a brown-nosers' game, and devoid of any integrity. I have not been able to reconcile what is necessary to succeed politically with maintaining my own sense of self, loyalty to principle, or devotion to truth. I'll stick with the music :)But hats off to those that can somehow be relevant within their political party and still maintain their integrity and adherence to principle. I believe there has been one or two such people in the past few decades :)

Yours in Liberty,
IamJohnGalt2011

IMO you deserve the bumps

And any lack of preceived recognition you have on DP just shows me that there are people here with an agenda. But don't let that stop you.

You have talent. What you need is a good entertainment attorney with international connections. Don't be choosy about work, because doors open in the entertainment business where you would never expect, that's why you see so many talentless people get to be big stars.. they are great busines people.

Study business and entertainment law... YOU'VE GOT TALENT and it's those who did not hear it that are the losers.

Welcome back Granger :)

I find any discussion about whether or not you belong on this forum irritating, to say the least. Say what you will, freely and without fear of reprisal. I suspect a "shill" would be much more effective than you have been :) Thanks for the kind words.

Yours in Liberty,
IamJohnGalt2011

LOL

Dang good point ((((iamjohngalt2011))))) I'm sure any good source for shill would have been fired by now.

Politics is huge business and most are in it for the money, that is a fact. For me, it is a lot like the entertainment business, and maybe why there is a cross over with some entertainers who become politicians?

It's an educational experience, either way.. even in music one is always learning, eh?

Thank you for the welcome

Libertarian Nine Inch Nails Song

Well, I think it sounds like NIN....seeing them in October!!!

Yours in Liberty,
IamJohnGalt2011