Sweet New Ron Paul Video...

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Here is a sweet new video on youtube...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YfYGp9tUves

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It's pretty good. I really

It's pretty good. I really like the style and idea.

If you have time, here's my recommendations.

1) I think the text is displayed a little too long, making the video longer than it needs to be. Most of the text is pretty short and quick to read. I would prefer seeing the images a little longer and less of the text. The images seem to appear very briefly in comparison.

2) After, "And the tyranny they once despised..." it shows a picture of an eagle, how about something tyrannical instead, like the king taxing his subjects or maybe even Cheney

3) At about 2:28 there is a long and bad transition in the audio. That might cause some to turn it off or go to another video rather than finishing. Cut out that dead space and make a smooth audio transition.

4) Ron Paul's audio is too quiet compared to the music, making it hard to hear. If anything, Paul should be louder and the music in the background. Also, I would have loved to have seen an image of Ron Paul there with people surrounding him - something like this or maybe this

5) When Paul is speaking the video is just black, there should be something there to look at. It's just a black screen for about 10 seconds.

6) At the end of Paul speaking, it's just the opposite as the beginning, too many images displayed too quickly. And Paul is hard to hear over the music. It also seems that while Paul is talking about all the oppression, oppressive images should be shown instead.

7) After that, there is another break in the audio transition.

8) It seems like the video should end with an image or final message, maye.

I think it's a good video that's why I took all the time to suggest improvements - not to put it down.

Great suggestions

I liked the video but feel these same things would improve the quality overall. Good job, though!

Healthnut4freedom

"Trust in the Lord with all thine heart; and lean not unto thine own understanding. In all thy ways acknowledge Him, and He shall direct thy paths." Proverbs 3:5,6

Healthnut4freedom

The lip of truth shall be established forever: but a lying tongue is but for a moment...Lying lips are abomination to the LORD: but they that deal truly are His delight. Prov 12:19,22

Good vid dude!

Good stuff, 'cept for that part @ 1:35.

There was still coercion. The Constitution allowed for taxation. The seeds of its demise were unfortunately contained within.