Need your advice..
Submitted by Thinkharder on Fri, 04/03/2009 - 17:40
Hey all.... This is my first video attempt and was wanting some feed back.
I plan to use this as a conversation opener to some war mongering republicans..
Any feed back is appreciated.. Dont hold back....
Thanks.
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Good video, just found a typo on the words "Its" and "to" at the end of it when you wrote "Its not to late to ask the question" The correct way is "It's not too late to ask the question" Otherwise it's great!
"People demand freedom only when they have no power. "
--Henry Longfellow
"People demand freedom only when they have no power. "
--Henry Longfellow
Party Bashing does NO good,WE need all
TIME to get over the war mongering Republicans ..Seems to me there is NO bring home of troops in the DEMOCRATS' aisle....They are ALL guilty & party to WAR...Just or unjust...Quit the party slander & pay attention to the task at hand...
you-no
Fantastic!
First of all, I love it. Secondly, I don't know much about making this type of video but I do have a few suggestions as a viewer: I think RP's voice and the background music (nice) should be the only sound. The kids and the animated guy in the car take away from the sombre mood and continuity. There are a few spots where it would be nice if RP's voice could be overlaid with certain images so they could linger a bit (the flag, Statue of Liberty, tortured prisoners, etc). I have no idea how difficult that might be to do.
I hope you don't mind the critique. The video is excellent and very powerful just as it is. I will be forwarding it to everyone on my mailing list.
Thanks!
thank you
For the feed back.. Its good to know that the message came out.
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
Very good
Very good
Thank you
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
This speech of Dr. Paul's is a prayer of conscience to end the
core of corruption that has taken place when good men unwisely give over their God-given rights to others.
It clearly, always leads to imbalance with nature and Universal Divine Laws.
Always.
About your video. Wow, very, very effective and thought provoking images with the words. Good for you!!
Good job.
I liked it- the message is clear and the music doesn't distract you when listening to and watching the video.
Great Job
I'm over to Myspace and facebook right now to spread it...
"I don't want to be in a battle . . . but
waiting on the edge of one I can't escape
is even worse"
"I have found that being rich is not about having the most but about needing the least"
Effective images,
they really add emotional depth to the speech.
wow.... thank you
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
I liked it.
LOVE the RP speech. It will be historic.
I heard Dr. Paul speak twice in person and he addressed the wars and military presence everywhere so perfectly. It would be nice if you could incorporate some of that too but I'm sure you don't want it to be too long.
I agree with the others about the music volume but it seems you are already planning to address that.
I completly agree with the historic aspect of this speech..
Thats probably why I am so apprehensive of mucking it up.....
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
You mean?
Something in lines with the number of countries we have active military bases?? Ive heard him talk about that a couple of times.. Ill see what I can dig up.. Shouldnt be too hard... Thanks for your honesty and your input...
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
yes.
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Looks great
thanks for your hard work putting this together!
I wonder why
you have zero views. I viewed it so you should have at least one. Good video not sure how a pro war person will view it. Let us know if you get any responses from them. It is very important to get people thinking thanks for sharing and for your efforts.
Prepare & Share the Message of Freedom through Positive-Peaceful-Activism.
Thank you.
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
Very Very good :) I love the " What If ? " speech.
Dr Pauls most powerful to date. congratulations nicely done.
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I want all 73 online users to give me their feed back as well...
How can I get the most views on this... I value the feedback that you have given, but it would nice to have the majority of our peers here comment...
Any chance that will happen?
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
Thank you...
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
don't hate me, but, it's
don't hate me, but, it's "advice"
also, females like me can't hear two things at once. So. less volume on the music. Great video though.
No hate....
Seriously..... What man is a man that does not try to better himself.. Any and all ADVICE is always appreciated...
Error corrected.
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
Looks Really Good, I'm Gonna Watch It!
A simple advice, "dump the frame from the picture, looks better, more professional you could say. Just my personal taste and I pretty much think that that is the consensus amongst video watchers.
I read from the other person, music being a little loud, well, it didn't bother me, but I'll check again.
Brad
Oh yeah, youtube has the tendency to darken videos, so maybe brighten them up a bit before uploadin' 'em.
Thank you...
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
You're Welcome
No one has commented or rated this on this vid, I guess the subject of illegal aliens is somewhat a dead subject. I didn't expect the music to turn a lot of folks on, but hey! I like it.
If interested!
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Here's mine that I did of illegal aliens. I had trouble with the music being in good quality.
The first part has 4 song titles in it: second song title comes in at 47 seconds, first one quickly fades out. The third title comes in very faint at 54-55 seconds, they run together until about 1 minute-30-35 seconds or so, I can't tell at this point. The third title gets louder when he bends over and picks up the article of clothing. I can't remember where some of these cut in and out at this point, I'd have to look at the program. 1min. 36 secs until the end of the first part, two titles run together, one of 'em has 3 pieces I think it is.
The second part of the video only has one title but I cut smaller pieces, some should be obvious I guess. I just repeated certain sounds. Anyway, at 5 minutes, 15 seconds or so comes in another piece, only for a short time. The small pieces continue in places throughout the rest of it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kgFBFdTPQCs&feature=channel_page
I liked it....
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
Excellent Speech
Dr.Paul!
Good video.
Yeah
I'll agree, the music is up too loud.
Yeah it seems a bit loud..
I see where I went wrong now... Sorry for blooding your ears...
What do you think of the music selection in general.. Too dramatic..
I heard this song and saw this video on the same day.. Something said that they needed to be put together...
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......
"Truth is treason in the empire of lies"......