Comment: Needs More Punch

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Needs More Punch

Paul - I think you have done a great job writing this, but it would have more impact, punch, and power if you could provide links to references and other scholarly input to the issue.

I am on the same page as you, I just think it would be beneficial to give people access to other sources of great information backing up these claims rather than just leaving the reader to hunt for the information themselves.

This is a very deep topic and most people don't get it the first, second, or even third time and I'm not sure they would look for the information themselves - give them some carrots to go after ;)

Keep up the good fight!