Comment: From another designers perspective.

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From another designers perspective.

1st - The grid work is pretty clean, not bad at all

A few things I would change.

1) Slider is extremely large, I would reduce it in height about 50% and split it between two images or a central focused Image and two halves on the outside of the dominant image.
2) The leading on your paragraphs should be reduced.
3) Content font should be reduced in size say 2 points.

I could likely go into much more detail but that is just the major things that I noticed on casual inspection.

Overall not bad I look forward to seeing it develop.

The Abuse of Greatness is when it disjoins remorse from power. - Shakespeare