Comment: Good Job! Here's a few pointers

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Good Job! Here's a few pointers

The red type: take the black down a bit on the emboss because red on black is already a bit hard to read.

And drop the "Like Rand...." down to the next line so it reads better.

And McCain and Romney: stack them on an angle (/) so you can make them a little larger

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