Comment: Wow

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Wow

Either this woman is a literary genius with a firm grasp on how to express feelings/emotions/descriptions or this story is nonsense.

"I can wear these pants," he said, his tone increasingly belligerent, the black-hole pupils of his eyes swallowing the blue irises.

In a story like this you really don't need to know that his pupils were swallowing his blue irises.

Was the purpose of this to incite emotion or educate others? I'd say it's the former, not the latter.