Comment: Well-Researched and Lengthy

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Well-Researched and Lengthy

...Can be also seen as:
"contains a lot of paragraphs in quotations"...
" not well-written and a chore to read"

You see, it's not always the presentation with the most facts that is more widely accepted.......
......It's all how you make a presentation.

SENTENCE CONSTRUCTION
GRAMMAR
SPELLING

It's "HOW" you PRESENT YOUR ARGUMENT...
...........I'm not gonna bother reading "YOURS" if It makes me feel like your presentation is a "chore" to read....and THAT can determine whether your article gets passed by in favor of someone else's.

"Beyond the blackened skyline, beyond the smoky rain, dreams never turned to ashes up until.........
...Everything CHANGED !!