Comment: Idea is sound, execution fails.

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Idea is sound, execution fails.

I really highly approve of the idea, I just dont think it will make an impact.

Dont all bite me at once.

The flow is too slow. Anyone not already in the know is going to get bored or frustrated. There is nothing gripping, compelling to cause someone that HATES ASSAULT WEAPONS to actually read thru to the end, of even past the first couple slides.

reworked to be gripping, maybe a little entertaining, with more visual impact, and unfortunately less reading, and I think you might be able to get a larger audience to progress through your slides.