Pretty good! I have admiration for small productions. I've seen how much work has to go into putting these things together.
My sole suggestion is for all films, not this one: find value in moments of silence. Only a few film makers have known when to stop the music and let the sounds of the world take charge.
"Cowards & idiots can come along for the ride but they gotta sit in the back seat!"
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