Comment: Yea...

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Yea...

It's too busy but it'll work.

I would make the main copy stand out more, It's too low in the visual hierarchy.
If you're just glimpsing all you'll read is Honor Yours! Stop Big Brother! Don't think that's strong enough a statement.

Something that would work on a more phycological level is:

"Stand for freedom or they died for nothing. Honor your oath today."

And put a picture of a full dress marine staring right into your eyes in front of Arlington National Cemetery.

Make it controversial!