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DP, Brian Frank would like your opinion, please

I am making the website myself, its a learning experience for sure. I know I have a lot to do, but I wanted to know what you all think of it so far. http://www.votebrianfrank...

Thank you,
Brian Frank

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A little sunlight and a smile

would help ya. =)

I'd like to see

you come up with a text treatment for your name. You'd apply the treatment to all the letters in the heading across the top, but also use the text treatment when your name appears by itself.

It's a nice suit, but it has a chalk mark? on the jacket and left leg.

I see chemtrails

in your sky picture. Best of luck to you.

BFRANK

SMILE!!! Add SC FLAG!

Im going to bed now

It looks like I have a lot to change when I wake up.

Thank you everybody!

Look at these Brian

http://medinafortexas.com...
http://www.randpaul2010.c...

What I like is the crispness. All have a definite color scheme, nice font, and deep colors for contrast. Maybe they can give you some ideas to make your website your own. Good luck.

ok

I will give you honest criticism

  • -main page picture is to large
    -not sure I like the sage color--maybe more patriotic

  • banner on main page needs something--maybe more color--make it flashy
    Brian Frank for SC Adjutant General

  • rename your home page--when I bookmark it I like something other than
    "home page"

  • About page..good--make the font same as challenge page
  • challenges..good
  • vision page--not sure what the pic is on the bottom---pixels are bad

    I had no idea what a Adjutant General was

    the link below will give you some great ideas...great bunch of people there
    http://www.webmaster-talk...

  • For the picture of you

    show yourself doing something! Such as sitting behind a desk working on papers or meeting with someone, speaking with a mike in your hand, visiting with constituents, etc. Look busy and competent. I know you ARE busy and competent, but have the picture show this.
    I can't comment on the website as I have no knowledge of building websites. But I think you should have someone help you with writing.

    Hey Brian~

    Giving this a bump because ai am done for the evening! First glance...too much space for the pic! You only need a head shot and a smaller space allocated to a pic of you! Put a statement below the pic...lose the "Don't Tread On Me Flag" Scenic or hometown background maybe better. Will check the rest tomorrow ! Just some thoughts at first glance only! We need you to win there!

    *****
    "I think we are living in a world of lies: lies that don't even know they are lies, because they are the children and grandchildren of lies." ~ Chris Floyd