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Ron Paul needs a professional speech writer, NOW!

I just watched Ron Paul's latest speech, every ones talking about here. Where He says that the US Military Troops last quarter gave more money to his campaign than all the other candidates, both Republicans and Democrats combined. To this point He’s got everyones attention, and then he lets the sale fall by moving onto another issue. He does not know how to CHINCH (close) the SALE.

All ideas are like anything else you sell, you need to be a salesman. The difference between a good salesman and a poor one is simple. They are both selling the same great product, the good salesman makes sales happen and the other doesn’t. The reason is simple, one knows how to close a sale, and the other does not.

Ron Paul should have clinched the sale by stating; “It’s time to WAKE-UP AMERICA, the troops are trying to tell you something, and they want your help! WAKE-UP!

I can go and on as to how He fails to clinch the sale on a “good idea” or “Constitutional Issue”

Please, someone who has influence with him, help him to see his error before it’s too late.

May God Bless Ron Paul and give him great wisdom!

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you know

You know I kinda like the fact that Ron Paul is'nt rehersed and speaks with sincerity from the heart, that is one of his strong points, at least thats what drew me to him. He did'nt seem like a puppet.

At the same time I do see how he sais things in the debates that go over the general publics head. Things that the learned can understand, but to the general public sound irrational.

That's why I think it will be a couple more generations of the Freedom Education before we get America back on track.

The Seeds of Truth we Plant today will grow to be the Tree of Freedom tommorow.

It's a mixed bag, sometimes subtlety is necessary

I don't feel there's any shame in outfoxing these politicians at their own game. We can just change the rules, can't we? You want speech writers? You want focus groups? Why don't we create a Ron Paul speech wiki? I can provide hosting! We can keep track of the talking points that are particularly effective at spreading the message to various voting blocs and supporters of other candidates.

We can have a response prepared and vetted for every nonsense argument made against Ron Paul's platform, so no supporter ever finds themselves grasping at straws while debating.

The original poster is right. Ron Paul's rhetoric, while patently correct, isn't resonating like it should. He needs to get fiery - these guys are everything he's fought against for 30 years, aren't they? THIS IS YOUR CHANCE TO TELL THE WORLD, RON! THIS IS OUR CHANCE! Let's make the most of it - it may take 30 years to get another one!

Speech writers are used

to convey subliminal messages... sounds great and most people wouldn't know what was said or meant... The many lies we have heard over the last 8 years mostly work through speech writers.

The truth as is spoken by Ron Paul is clear, the messages are clear.

Just think of the long way his message has come through in spite of all the controversy and black banning by mainstream media... What is it that you people want?? I read constantly: Ron Paul should do this, should say that, should run 3rd party....
All I can say is.... Trust Dr Ron Paul, I am convinced he knows what he is doing. His speech, his lectures, why all the work .. his messages sell!!

Just would suggest (to avoid misinterpretation of emails from him) that he would put the speech to youtube and provide a transcription so nobody will be questioning who is writing what. I am referring to the email which was reason for so much negativity and doubt and different interpretations.

I'm sorry

Most candidates need to memorize speeches because they are telling one lie or another. Ron Paul doesn't need to do that because he believes in telling truth. Do I wish he could throw things together like some of the other guys? yes I sure do. We are his clincher, we are his voice, we need to do the job of the sound bite. Ron Paul is not about the "sound-bite" politics that got us here. We need to trumpet your “It’s time to WAKE-UP AMERICA, the troops are trying to tell you something, and they want your help! WAKE-UP!" That is our job in this movement. This race has moved beyond Ron Paul, it has moved right into your lap. Ron said time and again it is not him but the movement towards freedom. You want Ron to win? Shout your sound bite from every corner! Let everyone you meet know how you feel. Bring this election to a real debate about the American future. You want a better speech, speak it yourself to everyone who will listen. When you have done that we can move on to congress.

GRAVEL!

He needs to be coached by Mike Gravel! Has anyone heard his debates? AWESOME. If only his and Ron's speaking abilities were swapped...

http://www.youtube.com/wa... - "Some of these people frighten me!"

http://www.youtube.com/wa... - Cloture

http://www.youtube.com/wa... - Military-Industrial Complex

http://www.youtube.com/wa... - War on Drugs

http://www.youtube.com/wa... - OWNS Obama (personal favorite!)

Too bad he's not aware of the reasons the establishment wants a gas tax/carbon credits. He's definitely a Dem.

Pick Me!

I speaks good ya heard?

LIke the message

politepaulite

In the time allow, he should focus on how people would benefit from his ideals.

No child left behind is a failure. Teachers know how to teach without the federal government piling on the paper work and dictating how they teach.

Most complaints I have heard against Dr Paul is that if he wants the soldiers home now, then he won't defend America if we are attacked.

Reinforce, that Dr. Paul wants a stronger military to defend our country. But he also wants Congress to do their job and declare War. Then fight and win. Love his line about "It makes no sense to send troops over there and leave our back door open.

Keep it simple and honest

I heard that the campaign recently added

Doug Bandow, who used to write speeches for Reagan at one time; and I think that bit at CPAC about McCain's "friends" might have come from him.
But the problem here is that I don't think Paul will stick to a speech - he speaks from the heart, and tries to tell his listeners everything at once. It's a problem because, while it does repel some people, it's also one of his strongest assets: he doesn't sound like a politician.

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George Dance
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/George_Dance_(Ontario_politician)

I may whine

but I saw him in Minneapolis and thought he was great!

Dr.Paul does give

pretty good speeches. He sounds authentic when many others don't. But, he does have some bad habits that affect communication. I wouldn't want anyone to actually write words for him, but a speaking coachwould be a terrific idea. Last Octoberwould have been even better.

Where Dr.Paul needs help is in the debates. He has had some strong moments but, in totality, he hasn't won over many voters. Or, importantly,made much of an impression on the old media.

More Like Liberty U.

He was calm and did not get tongue tied. I noticed the CPAC thing too. It does matter, I think more than we realize. I sit there at the debates just yelling out points he should make. His message and beliefs are the best for America 100%. But if he can't articulate them, it hurts.

style

that is mr pauls style, he doesnt need a speach writer, he needs his brain to slow down while hes talking,lol, i think his brain goes faster than he can talk) thats all.

ron paul 2008

lol

He has ALOT on his mind I think. I understand where he's coming from tho, it's not fricken simple, It's actually quite complicated, the way things have become dammit!

Bosh

600 people here have already said this I am sure, but he is REAL. If he sounded like Mitt I wouldn't believe him.

100,000 precinct leaders will win it

inform and recruit

'Live for yourself, there's no one else more worth living for,
Begging hands and bleeding hearts
Will only cry out for more...'

GRAVEL!

He needs to be coached by Mike Gravel! Has anyone heard his debates? AWESOME. If only his and Ron's speaking abilities were swapped...

http://www.youtube.com/wa... - "Some of these people frighten me!"

http://www.youtube.com/wa... - Cloture

http://www.youtube.com/wa... - Military-Industrial Complex

http://www.youtube.com/wa... - War on Drugs

http://www.youtube.com/wa... - OWNS Obama (personal favorite!)

Too bad he's not aware of the reasons the establishment wants a gas tax/carbon credits. He's definitely a Dem.

Precinct leaders

Precinct leaders are useless in states which have already had their primaries, unless he either wins the convention (unlikely) or goes third party (who knows).

WRONG

precinct leaders are the last backup if we have to write in Dr. Paul in November. A nationwide network of precinct leaders will get the vote out and help make sure the voice of the people is heard, not the voice of the corporate owned media. Think outside the box, man. We need every advantage, for the enemy is after us with both barrels blazing.

100,000 precinct leaders will win it

inform and recruit

'Live for yourself, there's no one else more worth living for,
Begging hands and bleeding hearts
Will only cry out for more...'

Speech writer

Dr. Paul's oratory skills are a part of his appeal, in my estimation. You KNOW he's not putting a snow job on you and he is telling the truth in his own words!

Quit being so critical.

Dr. Paul needs...

... money.

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Gee whiz! Wow! I wonder how he got this far without

one??? This idea is pure genius! NOT!! Puhleeeze!! LOL

Far?

You mean getting elected 10 times to a back woods district?
or how about getting less than 10% of the votes so far?

The suburbs...

... of the FOURTH LARGEST CITY in America are "back woods"?

Also, to go from an unknown to 21% in Washington state in just a few months is quite impressive in itself. And is an excellent and powerful foundation for the Revolution to build on.

Me thinks you need to read some books or something. Or get some other hobby.

*rolls eyes*

If it was so insignificant, why did the GOP establishment

work so hard and go to such extremes to prevent him from being elected??? The point is, he WON 10 elections. He gets no MSM coverage. If you don't like Dr. Paul why are you here? Go play with yourself, pr*ck!!

Shut your pie whole

I like Dr. Paul very much
But I am a realist. I live in the real world with real people and real issues. Dr. Paul can definately benefit from a speech writer.

What extreems did the GOP go to?

Hey, Jeffy boy....

do your research! The GOP even brought in a Democrat, turned him Republican and then threw their support behind HIM!! That's just ONE example. Look it up if you don't believe me.

That happens all the time

nothing extreme about it.
When you dissent from any club they will seek to get you removed.
It happens to me here all the time just look at your above post. for PROOF and TRUTH

turthy got spanky

bye bye

HUH???

What does that mean??? Jeffy, I think it's past your bedtime. Nitey nite, baby boy!! Put your thumb in your mouth for comfort and close your little eyes...LOL

Yup truthy that was a big LOL

You are a real knee slapper.
You humor and wit clearly accomplished so much to promote Dr. Paul and his message.

Agreed

Dr. Paul needs to take his campaign to the next level now.

keep it real speak from the

keep it real
speak from the heart
speak what you believe
you will never be wrong
IT IS VERY REFRESHING

No Speech Writer

Not having a speech writer and writing his speeches himself is something we love about Ron Paul. He's keeping it real.

That's something so important about our candidate, I cannot imagine him with one.

It's good to see Dr. Paul is

It's good to see Dr. Paul is breaking it down so the people with a less than grade 6 education can understand it in the speech in CSPAN.

Many agree with you

But at this Late Date........

Yes, please get him a speech

Yes, please get him a speech writer. I have seen this as his only weakness. He is a brilliant man and there is so much knowledge in his head he tends to talk very fast due to time constraints then trip over his words. Content is great, but only those who know all the background info really pick up on it.

Look what good speeches have done for Obama. Not saying he should follow the same tactic there (no substance, pure emotional manipulation), but he definitely could use help coalescing his thoughts and ideas into well constructed prose, substance maintained, but maybe just a little less so the average voter's head does not explode. :)

SOMEBODY, I wouldn't know how....

Make a online petition with names (I mean when there added of course), etc. and send it to the main branch, office, website whatever! I"ve heard this before and probably lots of you have too. Speech Writer and a Debate person if its still needed. Hope it wouldn't embarrass 'em!

I imagine...

men and women weeping together as their previously unarticulated angst over paradise lost vicariously resounds in their newly awakened souls. Like water to a weary soul sunburned and parched in deserts of dying dreams. A land where patriotism is only an elusive memory they had during the fever of unspoiled youth.

God is still in control...

I thought his speech was fantastic!

Speech writer wouldn't help....if the American people had him on their boob tube every day THAT would help. Nobody knows about him because of our stinkin controlled media.

www.rprradio.com

When freedom is at stake, silence is not golden – it is yellow- Tom Anderson writer patriot. 1910-2001

"Any people that would give up liberty for a little temporary safety deserves neither liberty nor safety." Benjamin Franklin

that's one of the reasons he's not on the boob tube every day

never mind that he doesn't deliver many good sound bites, the style of speaking itself does not sound mainstream. But, you'll say, if he gets the speech writer and changes his style, the media will still ignore him. Yes, because now it's too late for this race. But it would have made a world of difference last May or even November.

disagree

one of Ron's greatest attributes is how from the heart he is...is honesty and true belief in what he says fills the room currently. A professional and rehearsed speech would make him "sound" like everyone else. I will add, though, that even with a prototypical sound, his ideas might still resonate. I, however, love how he sounds. He sounds like one of us...like an American...like a true Patriot who believes what he says...speaking from the heart. If people don't appreciate that, then they deserve who they get.

mmmmmmmm KOOL AID......

we know he is from the heart.....it is the rest of the country we are trying to get to understand,and the delivery is not working, outside of here.

so you've been a supporter 7 weeks?

And you're the expert eh?

www.rprradio.com

When freedom is at stake, silence is not golden – it is yellow- Tom Anderson writer patriot. 1910-2001

"Any people that would give up liberty for a little temporary safety deserves neither liberty nor safety." Benjamin Franklin

my support started long before joining Daily Paul...

busy people usually don't have time to blog....I mean BLAHG

OK lets all FAX the campaign

OK lets all FAX the campaign demanding a speech writer, otherwise they must read some of whats written here.
Paper FAX speaks a lot.
if you guys agree lets do it,
or somebody post a forum with a title ( lets fax the campaign HQ).
the post must be written in a time where most people can view it, like now its kinda late .

It doesn't bother me...

God is still in control...
that he's not a polished speaker---that's what attracts me to him. Unfortunately, it seems most people need their dinners to come with a kazoo, a crazy-straw and ice-cream w/spinkles. Only because I am painfully aware of this sad fact do I wish Ron could bellow in stentorious eloquance golden streams of inspiration.

What the heck you talking about?

God is still in control...
You don't know the work I've been doing.

of course god in control but

of course god in control but he set up rules & who ever follow the rules will win.& it has nothing to do with you being a believer or not.

The Lord

Helps those That Help Themselves

I do my part

God is still in control...
and God does what he does. I take comfort that He has ultimate say-so in all events. He is good though I don't always understand Him. But I'll not stop working--far from it!