Robert Holloway to Place Advertisements On Nevada Talk Show Host's Radio Station
Ok guys,
We are going to place some advertising time on 840 AM. This is the radio station that hosts Heather Kydd (NV GOP) and Casey Henderickson. If you recall. Casey Henderickson called Ron Paul supporters Terrorists and threatened to break their arms. Let's do something that will really irritate him and buy advertising time during his show!
We have our chip-in up here:
You will also find a sample of the advertisement on the same page. We are revising the radio ad a bit for 840 AM. If you have any suggestions about how to rephrase the advertisement please let us know.
This is the thread where Casey threatens Ron Paul supporters:
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Done.
On the way! Best money I ever spent (well, since the Tea Party!).
Way to go Robert
IT'S DOABLE
95 % There...
Your radio ad "sounds" sincere and flows. Excellent delivery and very nice background music.
Now years ago, when I got my start in advertising I'd get to visit the studio and watch them edit the voice ads. For hours upon hours they would slice and piece together the "phrases" attempting to create a normal sounding delivery for a 30 sec spot. I didn't have the nerve to speak up... but I wanted to just tell them they needed to hire better voice over speakers up front...!
Some comments as you asked: Maybe clip short the part about financial assistance, keep the message about assistance yes but don't hammer it ( makes Nevada sound share cropper poor) maybe drop the phone number and just say contact us. Mostly I feel that the ending thought / note needs some more zing of sorts. Robert says; "Remember... The Convention Belongs to the Delegates"
Some suggestions... please add or subtract to them....
"Remember what our founding fathers wrote... Governments are instituted among men, deriving their just powers from the consent of the governed." (Declaration of Independence, July 4, 1776)
"Who would argue that People all over the world would give their very lives for our way of governemnt.... let us not aruge anymore as Americans.... for the country and the world is watching Nevada"
Like I said the advertisement is really good, and the flow is excellent. Good luck.
Laugh Hard, Hang Tough, Lend a Hand
Ramblin Randy
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for a patriot who is taking action. Go for it!
thank you.
thank you.
I love it!
Just keep it positive. It'll make him spin like a top. :-)
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Thank you!
Thank you!
25 dollars
to a grand effort. You folks are great, take care. Peace
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IT'S DOABLE
Thank you!
Thank you!
I added
a bit...the first line of the blurb needs to be punchy to attract attention: Calling all NV GOP Delegates to the Delegates Convention to make history.... The word "consider" sounds like the speaker is unsure of your reactions...of course everyone will want to be there!
IT'S DOABLE
Btw. These ads should run on
Btw. These ads should run on Tuesday and Wednesday. I'll give you an update when we conclude the deal with the sales rep.
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